Liked the sounding of it. I feel like you could have varied the melody a bit more between 0:00 to 0:25.
After that it was pretty well varied and it always introduced something, which kept my interest up :).
Feel like the mixing could have been better. At the loudest parts, I can cleary hear that the frequencies clash, like at around 2:50.
I feel like this track lacks a proper bassline. You have a bass synth playing the melody, but you have no actual base line, which make me feel like the track is lacking something
Loved you brought back the beginning melody at the end :).
Was a pretty solid effort, but I do think some things could be done better.
Keep up the good work :).
3.5/5 stars